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小作文
类型:柱图,结婚率对比
大作文
You should spend about 40 minutes on thistask.
Write about the following topic:
With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
题目类型:利弊分析
话题:家庭
大纲:
优点:更多住房、节省维护费用
缺点:社交减少、健康问题、儿童安全隐患
题材:城市生活
题型:双边讨论(推荐)
关键词:growing population(人口增长)+ homes with no outdoor areas(没有室外空间)
复现情况:新题
随着城市人口越来越多,现在人们不能像以前一样,住着带着室外空间很大的房子。本题要求考生对这个现象进行利弊分析。
很多烤鸭可能会使用一边倒来处理这个题目。比如,认为这个现象当然是不好的:没有花园,就没有空间从事一些与工作无关的休闲活动,只能在屋子里看电视,这对人的身心都不利;此外,没有空间,就势必减少很多社交的机会,这会导致人与人之间的隔阂和孤独。这样写未必不可,表达好了也是好作文。但唐老师想提醒一下,本题还有一个关键词,即growing population,前面的观点没有涉及这个关键词,因此建议分类双边讨论,即除了以上讨论的负面影响外,还讨论一下其产生的正面影响:没有室外空间,就节约了地方,可以建更多楼房,解决不断增长的人口带来的住房压力。最后的结论就是:室外空间小了,对个人而言是不利的,但对于整个城市居民的生活而言,则是有利的。
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高分范文
People used to live in houses with huge outdoor areas like a garden or backyard, but this is no longer possible for many people as a result of the relentless(无情的)development of urbanisation(城镇化). For individual city dwellers, this trend is not a good one, though for the city as a whole, it is positive.
With dwindled(减少了的)outdoor areas, people will find themselves confined to(局限于)the limited number of indoor activities. If in the past they were able to engage in(从事)such activities as walking, gardening, weeding, and planting in their backyard, when they got back home from work, now what people can do is sitting in the sofa and watching TV. While being detrimental(有害的)to their physical health, this will also make their life untolerably boring, especially for those who love to take care of flowers and plants or to take outdoor exercises.
Worse still, without enough outdoor spaces, people will not be able to find many opportunities to interact with each other. They will spend most of their off-work time isolated(隔绝的)in their match-box of homes(火柴盒般的家). As this goes on, they will grow more and more lonely and indifferent to their neighbors. This lack of soical life may result in(导致)many mental problems.
The disappearing outdoor space will do harm to the individual city dwellers both physically and psychologically, but it is necessary for the overall urban development. As more and more poeple rush into the cities, the government will have to address(解决;应对)their housing and traffic issues. By reducing the outdoor areas, the government can build more houses and roads so as to meet the basic demands of all people.
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